Servus, ich plane, eine kurze Fanfic zu Guild Wars (ich orientiere mich lediglich am Spiel!) in englischer Sprache zu verfassen, um das Ganze ein wenig zu üben. Ich wollte mal schauen, ob Interesse an der Geschichte besteht, indem ich einen kurzen Vorgeschmack gebe. Eventuell könnte ich sie auch ins Deutsche umschreiben, wenn das eher gefällt. Ansonsten hoffe ich natürlich, hilfreiche Kritiken (und vor allem auch Verbesserungen was Rechtschreibung/Grammatik angeht) zu bekommen. Genug gefaselt, am Ende schreib ich's ja eh nicht weiter - wie immer.
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The Guild Wars
One: „We must face it“
The wind blowed through Hattori's hair. Far away he noticed the deep roar of the last cannons and the dragons' yells. He looked up to the sky – it was grey, but unclouded. He missed the silence, the moment of peace, the feeling of being free. He had been a slave to his own mind, straying around for much too long, fighting for something unknown.
Hattori stopped and lifted his hand. Wolve barged against him, looking to the ground. He apologized, but Hattori seemed not to hear a word.
„Hattori, we need to go on. We did not wander this far to give up now.“
„Quiet.“ Hattori kneeled down to the ground. „We're too late. Again.“ He pulled his dagger out of the belt and sighed looking at it.
It pulsed deeply violet.
„Agony is faster than we could ever be. We must face it - this world cannot be saved. At least, we can't save it...
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